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Scathing LAT book review rebuttal

I was just so excited to have a review in LA Times that the fact that it was harsh didn’t really hurt my feelings much. To survive 20+ years in the advertising industry, my feelings dried up and blew away long ago. I do miss them. But without feelings in the way it was easy to appreciate how lucky I was to even get reviewed. Dan Neil isn’t the normal book reviewer or even advertising columnist but is instead the automotive columnist so he probably had to get special permission to review the book. But who knows. We were tough on the automotive industry in the book so perhaps that was the reason for the special assignment.

Ernest Lupinacci a founder of Anomaly and really brilliant creative wrote a rebuttal to the LAT letters section and he copied me. At this point it seems they have chosen not to run it so it’s social media to the rescue. Sometimes Ernest is so smart I have no idea what he’s saying. But he clearly still has feelings which is a beautiful thing. I’ve pasted it below.

Regarding Dan Neil's article "Ad guys' book is self-centered, half-baked" (Los Angeles Times, November 3, 2009), Mr. Neil implies that "perhaps Bogusky and Windsor never had an editor to challenge them on some of their most evident holes in their book." 

Having read Mr. Neil's column, I can't help but infer that he likewise operates untethered by any editorial guidance. And so, as he so magnanimously challenged Bogusky and Windsor on their collective point of view, I will now graciously attempt to challenge his. 

Granted, his assertion that "better products tend to sell better" would seem self-evident, but the real issue is what actually constitutes "better"? In the case of the stripped-down, web-friendly Flip video camera, that "better product" is exactly the sort of "better" product a legacy brand like Sony was incapable of designing - because Sony believes that they have the patent on making and marketing a "better" product. So suffice it to say, not all "better" products are created equal. 

The author's critique that consumers' would be ill-advised to design their own running shoes as they  "draw on esoteric fields of biomechanics and material science" is literally the very definition of "sophomoric." If Mr. Neil was even remotely aware of the realities of pre-fabrication and mass-customization, he might have noticed that it is possible for the average person to design their own home without holding a degree in architecture or engineering - since they are ultimately spec'ing the finished product by choosing from a set of pre-existing components. 

Of course, both of these points barely begin to approach Neil's egregious definition of marketing as merely the means to "...minimize the downside." 

Huh? 

I wonder if he were asked to define the purpose of the newspaper industry, if Mr. Neil wouldn't reply "What is journalism for if not to provide a place to run full-page newspaper ads in?" Marketing, Mr. Neil, is a means by which products and brands seek to differentiate themselves in the marketplace by contextualizing their quantitative and qualitative benefits. I'll attempt to show you what I mean using an example you might relate to: The New York Times' slogan is "All The News That's Fit To Print" - and whether that thought resonates with you or not,  I'm sure you'd agree that what "The Grey Lady" is attempting to communicate is that the quality of its product is superior, substantial, and thereby meaningful to the consumer. (Or perhaps, you would contend that the statement is somehow meant to "minimize the downside" of the reality that the Times is printed on paper that requires trees to be cut down?)

Lastly, Mr. Neil's very own estimation of what defines arrogance and naivete ironically and exquisitely exposes his own propensity to be arrogant and naive. I almost didn't believe my eyes when I read the sentence "It's far easier to craft marketing to fit the product than to craft product to fit somebody's idea of good marketing." Yes, of course it is far easier, but not necessarily smarter, or beneficial, or profitable. Don't take my word for it, just ask the city of Detroit. For decades it was in fact far easier to merely "craft marketing" that sought to sell poorly-designed, poorly-conceived automobiles to the consumer. And so, instead of doing what was necessary - spend money on retooling, and seeking new suppliers, and finding the money to "break open new paradigms" - the US Auto Manufacturers apparently followed your sage advice; they dug in their heels, held their breath, and arrogantly and naively watched an entire industry implode. 

Ernest Lupinacci

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Comments (22)

Nov 09, 2009
Chase Reeves said...
Good stuff... thanks for sharing @bogusky!
Nov 09, 2009
Glenn Edley said...
Now that's telling him. Stick to motorcars Mr Neil.
Nov 09, 2009
vaughndavis said...
Um, I get why the LAT didn't publish the letter. It makes some good points (I'm in the "got-the-book-and-like-it" camp) but it's terribly written. As you point out, sometimes it's hard to understand what the writer is saying. This is one of those times. There's a temptation when writing to the editor to lose sight of what you're writing about and instead use it as an opportunity to show how clever you are. (Often by using big words people have to sneak away and look up.) This letter is a good example of that and if I were the editor I wouldn't have run it either.

Also, it contains at least one apostrophe crime, and that is shit with which I will not put up, as they say.

But hey, I loved the book, especially the "four possible outcomes" on p. 20. So true. And the drawings were sweet.

Nov 09, 2009
Alex Bogusky said...
Yes. Ernest writes with huge gobs of passion. Couldn't they publish it and just throw in a couple of those (sic) deals? I'm no editor but that's what I'd do. Of course, maybe that's exactly why I'm no editor.
Nov 09, 2009
 said...
"For decades it was in fact far easier to merely "craft marketing" that sought to sell poorly-designed, poorly-conceived automobiles to the consumer. And so, instead of doing what was necessary - spend money on retooling, and seeking new suppliers, and finding the money to "break open new paradigms" - the US Auto Manufacturers apparently followed your sage advice; they dug in their heels, held their breath, and arrogantly and naively watched an entire industry implode."

Not all problems can be solved by Product Design + Marketing working together, but it's sure a great start. One could argue that management is the big differential on all of this since they are the ones who should be making this happen.

Yes, having departments working together is great, but providing that direction to the departments and being fearless in breaking protocol is much better.

Nov 09, 2009
Alex Bogusky said...
Agreed. And in every conversation I have with companies big and small this process is trying to begin but it has to start at the top. That's why the book tries to spend a lot of time drilling down to quick and simple procedure. Intellectually the process isn't hard to embrace but actually institutionalizing it is. You can count on your hands the companies that have done it. But if you only understand it as "better products sell better" or whatever his take was you'll never get there because you missed the entire point. Missing the entire point is probably comforting for people. They can say to themselves, "Oh yeah, we already do that."
Nov 09, 2009
michelrothschil said...
Nice email, shame they have selective posting... cheers!
Nov 09, 2009
Atom McCree said...
Let me translate that rebuttal into some real life terminology "Burn". I bet that makes him cry, which ironically he looks like he is crying in the drawing of himself in that article.

Look it is why there are industry thought leaders and then their are companies that go bankrupt and can't figure out why. "What is very dangerous is not to evolve"- Jeff Bezos of Amazon.

Nov 09, 2009
simonbilling said...
"All the news that's fit to print" was coined by Adolph Ochs in early 20th c. to distinguish the paper's product from the 'yellow' journalism practiced by Pulitzer and Hearst in their vicious competition for readers. And while the phrase may have entered the vernacular, I'm not sure it's a particularly useful example of a successful product positioning.

The Times is a better example of a product that's sufficiently distinct and relevant to a discrete segment of the population as to sell on its own merits.

Until the internet came along and their market began to shrink, newspapers did very little in the way of consumer marketing.

Nov 09, 2009
Morgan Brown said...
I love the rebuttal to the the critique about crafting marketing to fit a subpar product or customer experience. It's the exact type of thinking that has led marketing astray for years and has helped put detriot, newspapers and a raft of other industries and companies in the toilet.

If you're sitting there thinking "well, it's not the best product, but how can I market this so people will actually want it?" you might as well start working on your resume instead - because your company is F'ed already.

Nov 09, 2009
johndodds said...
He could also have been challenged on what his use of "sell better" where he clearly equates better with absolute quantities - and gives no consideration to the size of the specific market involved.

And doesn't everyone who writes about business not know that the first P of marketing is and always has been product?

Nov 09, 2009
candace kuss said...
To start, was so flummoxed that an automotive columnist was doing a marketing book review, I had to actually read Mr. Neil's column (10 minutes I'll never get back). Perhaps the biggest thing he doesn't get, is in the back end of the quote: "It's far easier to craft marketing to fit the product than to craft product to fit somebody's idea of good marketing." Fwiw, crafting product to fit "somebody's" — aka the real people formerly known as 'the consumer' — "idea of 'good marketing' " isn't the point. Crafting product to fit their idea of good service, efficacy, superior performance — now that's where the marketing is baked in...
Nov 09, 2009
Mark Peesel said...
Years ago when I was in radio, the phone rang during a show and an anonymous voice yelled "YOU SUCK!" My partner said one of the best things ever... "There's no such thing as bad press."

Right on! Good to let your feelings blow away...

Nov 09, 2009
 said...
ha! i finally have something in common with alex bogusky other than great brown hair. Mr. Lupinacci did me a similar service a few years back in Ad Age when he responded to an article disparaging my work for budweiser (wassup!). he nailed it. revenge is a dish best served cold. true that!
Nov 09, 2009
 said...
in fact, maybe that's ALL Ernest should do from now on. respond brilliantly to tossed off pseudo-journalism. a tight niche, but hey!
Nov 09, 2009
 said...
Hey, Alex--

Congratulations on the publication of the book, and best of luck with it.

Nov 10, 2009
jamespothmer said...
Congratulations on the excellent book. Expecting prominent review placement and a reviewer who has a clue about 21st century branding...hah!
Nov 10, 2009
Josh McHugh said...
Wow - Ernest: it's one thing to field a considered rebuttal to a misguided review, and another entirely to pin the blame for the US automotive industry's downfall on the reviewer. Good job on both counts!
Nov 10, 2009
A. Let us know if a rebuttal happens.
Nov 11, 2009
Richard Tseng said...
Write a review full of holes, then refuse to publish any sort of rebuttal. Given the papers' desperation for ad revenue I wouldn't be surprised if this was some 'marketing' strategy of their own.

"Looks like a famous ad man wrote a book. Let's give it to the gear-head who's still bitter that Eurasian 'marketing' killed his favorite car companies.

The maligned won't be able to resist running some sort of rebuttal campaign on every one of our pages. The paper is saved!"

At least that's how it works in the movies.

Nov 12, 2009
 said...
New ideas create flame. Consider this review perfect validation.
Nov 30, 2009
Bruce DeBoer said...
Alex - may I suggest that your detractors spend 60 well invested minutes by watching this: http://vimeo.com/3204792 - Umair Haque teaches us about the new democracy - post Sept. '08. It's long, it's like going back to Econ Class, but if you're in business you should know what your doing.

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